Holy.
I can TOTALLY relate.
But you said it so poetically...
It was magnificantly beautiful.
Awesome piece.
You should enter it into a competition or something!

-Alyssa. xo

Ahhh. How is this nothing much?? This is A LOT. Though it's short. But full of emotion and a painful love. I missed your writing. I love it. take care. hope you're doing ok. Love ya!

` Liz =]

Sar...this is so eloquently beautiful....but where are you? try and contact me okay...I've been waiting since the past two days...

A great peom. here yo out the feelings to be aprt to your love one. i loved your poem. and the way of your writing style great job take care 5/5