Comments : Short But Sweet

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Nicely done poem. i like how it was grateful yet sad. that gave it a less cliche fact. normally depressing cliche poems bother me because they are just to flat out cliche. but this wasnt. there was more to it. =] you said you thinking voting reflects the emotion you put into it. according to that i give it a 5. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    I agree with the title...it is really sweet...
    it's not that short, though...=)
    i have only one small question:
    in the second stanza, don't you mean:
    "i have seen a lot" instead of "i have see"?
    besides it, the poem is awesome...

  • 16 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Wow. I cant really explain this but I really felt alot from this.
    Great poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Extremely confusing poem
    needs a little work
    good job though