Comments : Love Me, For Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Jason

    Well written poem. When I read this poem, I hear beautiful words in my head.

  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    Wow! I love it, so powerful. And I like the well, kind of contradicting lines. That you would house you're special person 'cause you'd do that with a dog! *humour!*

    I really like the last stanza, the line of the words I love you flowing freely from your mouth, I guess it's just the idea of I love you flowing. It's really good!

    Thanks for your comment on my work ^^
    See you,
    xxxx
    Lizzy

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    And for loving you most of all.
    ^ This line didn't sound quite right to me. I think it sort of messed up the flow.

    And for giving you my very last.
    ^ This one also didn't really make sense to me. Your very last what?

    Flows freely from my mouth.
    ^ And in this one, I felt you should be saying "from your mouth" instead of "from my mouth". Oh and also it should be "flow" not "flows"

    Awh, this was a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. It flowed well and had real meaning to it. I liked the fact that it was different to other love poems. The emotion was clear and the descriptiosn were good. I loved the last stanza best. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    This was a nice piece you could tweak it abit to make it read more smoothly but apart from that a good read :)

  • 16 years ago

    by stefanie

    I can so relate to this. its like you took the words that i wish to say to someone right out of my mouth. great job. it got straight to the point and the message was sent out clearly. beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful expressed emotions penned, "Love is a choice and commitment to others' true and lasting happiness. It is dedicated to growth and fulfillment. Love is not selfish."

    Beautiful done~

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Aww beautiful poem! 5/5 i love the emotion in this poem and the words you used and everything about it, i thought it was excellent!
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by LovelyDivine

    All I can say is wow! That really got to my heart. sometimes it can be so hard to find someone that will love you for who you are. Hope you find that person. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Though on certain parts of the poem the flow was rather uneven, it nevertheless carried much significance and truth in its essence. Love is a wonderful principle and sensation. With this universal feeling, the person discovers his true self. It really is a sad thing how most relationships nowadays end in vain. Thanks for sharing a wonderful message that would definitely enlighten your readers. Regards.

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Great one. Love it!!!