Lol, i like it its like kindda funny but sort of sad at the same time, lol you have a lot of potential keep up the good work

I like it but not like WOW or anything it is kinda sad

This is a really good poem!=]

WOW!!
Really aweosme poem.... and little mindblowing... In short, your poems is cool, Keep up this good work :D

That made me laugh. good job! haha

I never knew that someone could make suck a great poem cute,funny,sad, and true all at the same time but u did it!!! :)

WonderfuF poeM! MeaningfuL, toO. 5/5

LUZAn

I liked that story. nice to know and read this type of poem here. take care
5/5

Yeah...this one is realy sad.....i think i can relate myself..in this poem..i fall for my bestfriend...hoping for her heart but she can onyl give her hands....... =( right?

5/5 nice job bea..... keep it uP..... ^^,

Nice poem...I can really appreciate it...gonna read more from you..

I love it! so sweet!

Great 5/5 x

This is one of your best writings I believe... Such a talented young girl... your poems are awesome... 5/5

This is horribley sad, and i am kinda going through a similar thing, cept the roles are switched. great poem! ^.^

Omg! this is really sad. =[
Great poem btw.! =]