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What a beautiful piece. So heartfelt. Love is the most wonderful feeling in the world. Yet it can be the most painful.

Ahh..., to dream and hope, It's what helps us all cope.

How very true my friend.
Love Cindy

WOW that was simply beautiful, very well written and the word choice was great, you speak of love and how great it is and can be, your right it can be and as Cindy said , It can be very painful at the same time, not meaning to be on your part , but it happens, anyway wonderful poem ,, keep it up,, your friend Tracy d....5/5

That is such a touching piece adn I couldn't agree more with us all needing to dream and hope to cope.Excellent write ,well done.

WOW that was just pure beauty,i love it.keep it up.

It was so cute and touching,the story was breathtaking and you explained dreaming is so important in this masterpiece

I especially liked;

To have you in my arms to hold and caress
Would relieve all earthly problems and stress
Whilst i am running my fingers through your hair
I would be floating, lighter than air

Keep it up,
Laura

Very nice poem.

This poems remain me someone......Beautiful sad...

What a beautiful piece.
Very touching.
I love to dream..
I really enjoyed reading this beautiful piece.
Take care

Very good, I like your creativity and imagination, thanks for sharing.

How sad to miss one that you love....and how beautiful the hope that the longing will be fulfilled by a reunion in the future.....All the best, Debbie

Wow, I think that's amazing. I really really liked that. Something like that actually happened to me. Fantastic Job!

I like this poem, its very true.
what would life be like if we didnt have dreams and hopes?
the world would pretty much be a dead end.
a great write
take care x.o.x

That was absolutely beautiful...I loved the excellent use of words and the rhyming in this poem, bravo!
You definitely got the message across, keep it up!
Best wishes,5/5

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

I like this poem its sweet and not to long

Love the poem hay read mine and tell me what you think

Awww Thats Quite Sad But Good At The Same Time=] x

When you truly love a person you want to always be together, holding hands.That's the way I feel about my sweetheart too. I can totally relate to this poem. Great job!

5/5 Ingrid