Wonderful poem, made me feel like I wanted to fly, a well written poem, nice flow to it and wording was great, had lift you up feel to it, great job ,, keep it up,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Thank you very much

I love the feeling this gives me

Hey tara =)
het is een leuk gedicht, ik wil ook vliegen:P
het is trouwens your niet youre. tenzij je you are bedoeld. dan is het wel you're.. ma volgens mij is het gewoon your. het is leuk geschreven, moest je deze voor school schrijven?
kuz stef

"Any moment,
Anything can change,
Let go of your yesterday,
And fly away."

love it!!
great write well done, i was also reading your other poems and you need to keep an eye on your spelling but other then that i like it. Keep it up chickie :) 5/5

A poem of letting go, of freedom. A great message and so well conveyed. Live in the now. Excellent poem!

Write on!

Grey Ajurahck

I wish i could just fly away that would be great.just like this poem was......

Awesome u did a great job keep writing and youll be even better

Hey Tare, mooi gedicht...
Best veel zeggend, komt het echt uit je zelf of uit ervaringen van andere?
Prachtige woorden keus ook :D Ik hoop dat je net zoveel waarde in de woorden legt als in het gevoel :D dan komt alles goed :D

xXx

GothaX

Just four words, that "i love your poem"

You know what... you don't need some advice anymore cuz you are so good already...
people who create and write. it actually does flow-just flows from into their heads, into their hand, and they write it down... 5/5

Great poem ^_^

Very nice poem, its expression and a content filled with emotions. 'Any momeny, any thing can change' i like those words on the 2nd stanza

I love it
I understand where ur coming frm

Gr8 job!!! really an awesome poem

I really like the flow in the poem, had a good ending to it, it only lost flow at this part,

"Because its time,
Time to fly,
Until you dont cry."

That part made it loose flow a little but I love the meaning of the poem and love the how it all wraped up, Needs a little bit of touching up, but so does everyone elses poems, (espicially mine) =p

Keep up the good work, Keep writeing =)

I rele like this very inpresive<33333