WOW Cindy that was beautiful , very heartfelt poem , wonderfully written , loved every stanza, it was sad but very good, :

Broken heart unable to smile
Empty soul devoured by fear
Heavy grey mist settling in
Hiding flow of endless tears

thanks for sharing my friend and have a great day,,, your friend Tracy d,,,,,,,,,,5/5

Forever and for always
Your love will carry me through
Waiting for the sun to shine
When again my eyes see you

that was my first stanza. your love shows in your poem. take care 5/5

Cindy dear, another beautiful penned you portrait here, So many dreams are waiting to be realized. Decisions are too important to leave to chance. God, help you to do only what you can, and trust you for the rest. And don't forget one thing for even a day, how very special you are.....Hugs! you be safe......Bert.

Oh Cindy - that was amazing. I always seem to get teary eyed when I read your poems, maybe because I know what you're writing about and maybe because you've been through one thing I fear the most - loosing your most beloved. I do love reading your poetry and how you deal with things.

All the best and take care

Mo

Beautifully written, Cindy!
I love this poem, it's sad, but beautiful.....

5/5 Ingrid

Forever and for always
Your love will carry me through
Waiting for the sun to shine
When again my eyes see you

Beautiful Cindy....congrats on placing in the club contest!

Your poems amazing and it has decribed the feeling that i've been through, thank you for writing this poem. x x x

Hey wow that was a really deep poem!!
i liked it alot..
keep it up

Well as always your poems are amazing =) I really like the ending of this piece - I find it really sweet. Flow was flawless. You're a very talented writer.

TC!

*Thanks for the comment*

Oh my gosh i love this poem! this is one of the best i have seen on this site in a while! im not even kidding! i can really relate to it too and i love poems that remind me of myself & my friends and everything! keep up the good work.<33 by the way, 5/5 for sure!

Cindy,it is amazing the way you pour your heart out.A true lover.You will certainly meet your beloved-know not in what life.Universe conspires on what we want.God Bless.My prayers are with you.

Your writes always touch my heart ...your write so beautifully.

Tis another wonderful poem cindy, love the flow, tis perfect as always,
i give this one a flawless 5/5!!!
keep them coming, want to read more!!!

Very well written cindy...a very nice tribute to love, keep up the good work

Very well written cindy...a very nice tribute to love, keep up the good work

Perhaps your best work absloutely beautiful. at least a 6/5. totally awesome. all the best wishes ben thompson

Again, I loved it!! You are so talented, this was beautifully written, filled with emotion.
Love Tara-Kay

This is really beautiful. You're very talented. Very Very talented. I like it.
Oh....by the way i have some new inspiration for some work so hopefully there will be more soon....

That was such a beautiful poem!

Forever and for always
Your love will carry me through
Waiting for the sun to shine
When again my eyes see you

Loved these lines.

Another beautiful piece of poetry filled with emotion that i can feel 5/5 another piece of flawless wonderment!

xD
~NinjaGirl~