Hey ur poem was great, i loved letting go of is just so hard i couldn't have put it better myself. xxx keep it up.

Grr. This poem reminded me of my ex..

Anyway I find it realy sweet, good job, I think the flow was smooth, keep up the good work.

5/5

Stanza's one through five were perfect. They were full of emotion and imagery. I actually felt each and every word. Stanza's six and seven seemed a bit hurried to me. I could actually relate to the whole poem. But stanza's one through five just flowed easier and beautifully to me. I suggest you try and add a little more to the last two stanza's to even out the flow. Other then that I say this is wonderful. Overall I give you a 5/5 because I believe this came from the heart.

Very emotional poem. It's so sad and many people can relate to the difficulties of letting someone go. Smooth flow, great job. 5/5

I want us back
Everything we used to be.
A life spent together
That was meant for you and me.

Favorite lines ^^^^^^^

~ Lainey

What a sad piece. Very heart felt. Feelings of lost love are so very painful.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

This is one of the best love poems I have read in a long while you are a very talented poet and you can really feel the emotion in this poem.

I know the heartach. the pain... it hurts like hell. imagining him with someone else...telling her the same thing...

u never really get over it...u just get used to the pain. every now and then when u think about him, your heart will skip a beat, and every now and then ur gunna cry.,. only because thats what happens when true love is broken..

ur poem was wondeful sweetie. *hugs*

An emotional piece of write.Very well penned-true feelings.5/5.keep it up.

'We weren't meant to be this
Unhappy and apart'
^^^
Amazing!
Love the whole poem but those two lines really got to me, Fantastic!
x

I absoultey lovee thisss poemm.
it reminds me of one of my exss.
gahh i hate heartbreak!!

greatt poem!!
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