Eternity isn't enough

by Capri   Aug 15, 2007


Another Assignment: write 2 Tankas. (not sure what the correct spelling is but yeah... its like a Haiku. 5 syllables one line 7 the next followed by 5-7-7 so yeah.. enjoy!) :)

Gently whispered words,
Carried sweetly on the breeze,
Thinking to myself,
"Eternity isn't long enough,
For you and me to be 'we'"

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  • 16 years ago

    by chris2533

    Still my fav

  • 16 years ago

    by chris2533

    This will definately be on my favorites......my opinion is-your right, it isnt.