Comments : My box of memories

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    HonestlY speakinG, i luV thE stylE oF yR writingS N therE iS a speciaL outlooK... keeP uP yR writinG... i likE iT... 5/5

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww this! Ahh it was so cuuute! And your emotions were so strong in it. Outlook was very original and loved the spacing!
    5/5 Amazing write!

  • 16 years ago

    by cassanova

    Beautiful poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Love this! 5/5 you should rrc mine sometime. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Dance Girlie

    Very original and heartfelt. Can relate...I think almost every girl has "that box". =] Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I like how you start off saying the box holds the memories, but then, it's like all those memories are pieces of your heart, and the box really keeps your heart protected. It was a neat twist to the piece and I really really liked it!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Im sorry, that was very sad, but I liked it very very much ^^ 5/5 outstanding. ^^
    Point for you!

    :AND THE CROWED GOES WILD RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA:

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Well at least it is a box of memories, they might be bad some might be good but at least u didnt forget all about him.. =]

    luv ya!

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Really good
    you forgot your i in it after 'll never wear it

  • 15 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    I understand it shows that memories are more than things we see in our minds I like it.