Comments : You'll never know

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Thats so sweet!!
    glad u love sum one!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow.. Even though it is short, I really loved this poem and enjoyed reading every single line. I mean, I can just connect to it in so many ways.. It was a wonderful piece of work. This guy loves his friend so much, but won't tell her so he doesn't ruin their friendship, even though not having her is making him miserable. I also liked how you rhymed it all up and you kept it pretty organized. Great job, keep up the good work! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    This poem is great..i love it!..keep smiling=]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Lovely poem James.
    obviously written from the heart.
    Couldnt ask for better.
    love you x.o.x