This is a great poem
lots of emotiong
and good puntuation
good job
but in stanza 5 i think you made a mistake with the word wants
i think you should write WANTING lol
but yeah maybe not
but good job:D:D

Keenan

I liked this poem alot, I can relate to this piece. Loved the theme behind it of the little mermaid it was quite cute and interesting. The truth spoken behind this poem was great and hearfelt I could really feel the words and emotions created within this poem. Loved the flow it was spot on. Well done on writing a sweet poem about someone who obviously means the world to you. 5/5~mel

^^ yeah it does kinda remind me of the Little Mermaid. This poem was actually outstanding, best love poem to me so far. I was hooked and couldn't stop reading. this is lovely, Alissa. You did a great job in this.
Keep it up and head strong! =3

I like the story behind this poem, and the imagery in the piece is greatly created.
I have to offer one suggestion: Don't repeat same words in one stanza, as you did in the second with "love" and in the last with "given" because that leaves really bad impression.
You can work a little bit more on the flow, too.
4/5 from me

Great, Perfect, Angelic...there arent enough words to describe this poem

WOW!!!! again another beautiful piece you are a great writer! the ending of the poem i loved so much!

5/5 so beautiful. this is a lovely heart warming poem. your words are so powerful that you can see what you write. well done