Luanne
Congrat's on the club chaleenge win with this piece. Very deserving win :) This poem is stunning. The imagery is breath-taking.
Excellent writing my friend.....Love Cindy

This is such a beautiful poem. Great choice of words by the way. Keep up the great work!

"Easing the pains of yesteryear
Fighting demons along the way
Guided by a gentle hand
Heartache slipped away"

Luanne,
As I was reading this I thought, "great stanza, by far the best there'll be... then I read this one":

"Moonbeams fell from heaven
Nights echoed sweet delight
Ocean breeze swept whispers
Painting love upon the night"

WOW. Great write. Each of these stanzas stood and and grabbed ahold of me.

Excellent word choice and flow.

Always,
Jeannie

Wow, so much emotions! I loved the format of the poem, completely original! Keep up the good work! 5/5

Mom this was excellent! I thought this would be a tough poem to write (especially makingit rhymr) but you did excellent! This poem was beautiful!

Chels

WOW That was a totally awesome poem, excellently written and the word choice was wonderful, love the way you let your mind go in this , super job, and a pleasure to read ,, thanks for sharing ,,,,,your friend Tracy d 5/5

I love this..I haven`t seen very many good alphabet poems, but this one was amazing. The fact that you rhymed in here as well was truly a great way to show off your talent. Great job!

5.5
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Wow, this poem is excellently written so powerful, amazing and unique. I like it from the beginning to the end, every line has great wording. Whole atmosphere in the piece is superb and captivating.
The rhymes are also excellent, they don't seem forced, and the flow is very good, natural.
My favorite stanzas are (I can't chose just one):
-Moonbeams fell from heaven
Nights echoed sweet delight
Ocean breeze swept whispers
Painting love upon the night

and

-Understanding life's tribulations
Vacillating mind I do not blame
Wandering soul free at last
X-rayed souls, we are the same-

Well done, you truly deserve (more then) 5/5
This one is going to my favs.

Beautiful Writing!! Excellent Poem!!

5.5**
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