Like the flow of this poem and the words fit well. its a good strong poem xxx

I wonder if you know that i had to do that with you

though i didnt hurt you

love dom

You do have an amazing talent to capture what your feeling and put it down in words, which I find hard at times. Sadly this is the only reason thats kept me from going all the way and ending it, the pain I'd leave others with =( Hang in there and another fantastic work of art ^_^ 5/5
Rhea