Beautifully Penned.

I always enjoyed these kinds of poem's. ANd you should me why.
The flow was well.
And overall just amazing.
Loved it,
Elaine.

This poem is adorable, i love it!..keep smiling=]

I thought it was a beautifully penned poem and it was great, there was real emotion coursing throught it, and i felt what you wrote. The three year age difference and the fact of always wanting to be together, but guess wat, in reality that never seems to happen. None the less, great poem

a well deserved
5/5

Hey bro, great peom. very well written. dont listen to the ppl how say that 2 ppl who really care about eachother cant be 2gether... they dont know anything unless they've been there themselves. Listen to your heart, not your mind. listen to other ppl opionions too, but follow your heart always.
5/5
Luv ya!
ur lil' sis

I enjoy reading your poem.. it was simple and a common poem but it was nice and even the title of it is so heartwarming and sweet.. but one line just awaken my curiosity but don't mind it, that won't destroy the image of the poem. Keep up the good work!

The flow is a bit off I agree the style change at the end caused this, other than that you did a good job, try stepping up your vocab a bit, this will increase the power in your read, and help bring out the emotion,

This poem is so sweet, i think you mcould have used stronger words but other than that 5/5

Awwww this is so loving.....

the flow was great at the beginning and middle but near the end the flow was kinda off...and also the rhyming...but overall i like the message behind this..so i give you a 4/5 on this..nice job.

Great poem. Beautifully written. I love your choice of words and I think the statement in the third stanza is so true. Also, in the first line of the second stanza you forgot to capitalize an "I" and in the third line of the third stanza the word is suppose to be "it's" not "its". Anyway, the flow in this poem was great except for in the last stanza. It seems like you rushed the end. But nevertheless I give you a 5/5.

Keep it up && Take Care!

-Shannon <3

I really like it cause im going through love troubles..but it almost feels not complete to me..like im waiting for the next stanza..but overall really good..i like freestyle cause thats what i do..so keep up the good work!

I really like this. The subject can be really cliched with love poems, but i didn't feel like this was. It's so emotional. The flow is good too.
But love isn't about age,
Its about the feeling between two.
And its about being on the same page,
And always having something new.
Fave lines ^^^^
~ Lainey

5/5 simply beautiful. this is an outstanging poem and its heartwarming to read. well done.

Aww this is such a sweet poem.. i really like the way it was written and your whole view on love.. excellent job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment. =]

Amazing hun. I think its perfect..Keep it up
xxASHLEYxx

A lovely emotional poem that I can relate to very well. I like the layout I feel that some rhyming may help the flow in the poem but the message was very clear.

Hey bubs
AWWW.. it was very cute i totally loved it! very well written, nice flow and great wording.dont listen to what ppl say listen to what ur heart says but make sure its not ur mind telling you what to do. and if u ever need some1 to talk to im here for ya!
ur favorite
Kate~

What a sweet poem.
The message was very clear and the flow was right.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care!