It so sad but you expressed your feelings so well and i am so sorry! 5/5 i loved it! its full of emotion!

Thank you so much

Woow this is a realy good poem soo good i had to read it twice it even brought tears to my eyes. you are e very good writer and i know how you feel ive been there before with my bestfriend to. i hope it all works out in the end take care. kasia 5/5

Aww i realli luv it. lil kids tease each other all the time, dont beat urself up. its a sad story, but u told it well.
5/5
xx

Soooo sad....but i like it

Wow!!
i absolutely loved this poem!
it was amazingg!!!
the flow was fantastic and you expressed yerself so well. there were sad parts, funny ones too. i loved that.
im sry to hear about yer friend but kno she's watching over you. i can relate to your loss.
keep up the nice work!!

This was amazing. going on my favorites. this would translate very well to slam poetry. great job