Nice poem! I like it a lot! and thanks for all your comments..(o:

This is lovely!!! ur writing is great

Very nice peom... keep it up

Great job ... nice peom

Yeah, the words are so awesome... 5/5 here.

Im feeling this poem right here,
nice imagery, very nice.
Bleess up! keep doing your thing!

-JET L

Awwww. thanx thanx alot of thanx very innocent and sweet writing. welldone. dear
5/5

Good job, great poem with strong wording and excellent atmosphere. Well done!5/5

Lovely poem, lovely technique, more lovely comments to come.
This poem fascinated me, it sparks a rare kind of intellect that is rarely picked up on.
i encourage you to continue writing.
take care x.o.x

Lovely poem, lovely technique, more lovely comments to come.
This poem fascinated me, it sparks a rare kind of intellect that is rarely picked up on.
i encourage you to continue writing.
take care x.o.x

Hey wow i liked it alot and ty 4 commenting on mii poem lvoe ya ashley danielle

Beautiful poem really enjoyed it.. 5/5

I LOVE IT!!
It's very very good.
Also it's very beautiful.

Lovin it!!
its a wonderful piece
ur soo right
keep it up
xoxo
(btw ur one of my favorite writers)
lol :))

Wonderful!