Comments : No One Can

  • 16 years ago

    by fatima

    This was also a good poem keep it up x x x

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    This poem was full of emotion, you said so much in such little words. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    I love it, your short poems always hit me hard, you're amazing. beautiful job, but what else?

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Short and sweet with abundant meaning though it is precise.

    Humko bi ye poem accha lagaa :)

    You deserve 5/5 from me :)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Again amazing. I love these short pieces you have written. Expecially this one.Something about it stabbs at my heart to make me feel what you feel. When i read this the tone that I get from it is sad alone and emotional. Well done on creating such a beautiful poem. ~mel

  • Another short yet emotion filled poem, very nicely written and portrayed.

    5/5 once again :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Short but yet enough meaning to make it enjoyable..excellent job.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Im stunned.

    This was probably you shortest, and yet you still amazed me with your ability to lace that love in there.
    This was beautiful it flowed well, and it was heartfelt.

    I really liked it,
    Keep it up,
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Very very short but it received the message ^_^.