That is a beautiful story, i really liked it, the way it was written was so natural and so flowing and it was so real in my mind's eye
5/5 :) hugs for you!!!

I like this poem better. I find it really sweet, well done. I have one suggestion though.. try to put it into stanzas :)

My Favorite line.
Together flying through magical skies.

Keep up the good work!

Hey! beautifully done! see!? u CAN write love peoms! :D this poem is making ME jealous! ah! now i have to write something THAT good! lol, very very VERY nice poem, as long as u keep on the positive side, k? hugs! 5/5

So I realized you're not on my favourites ... which shocked me. Decided to read a poem or two before I hit "Add to favourites" .... and glad I did.
This was a very, very lovely poem Miu. I think I've just been beaten in the love poems category .... your wording is absolutely beautiful, and simply the perfect choice; Ah, I can feel the emotions.
Good bloody job.