I miss my dada too he died when i was 9 and im 13 now=..[ i love your poem it was touching lol it made me cry my dad died ummm by diveing into a pool and he hit his head on a glass and it split his head soo ummm... yea

WOw that's really sad. Made me wanna cry.I know what it'slike tolose a loved one...

This is really strong. I love it. Great job.

Dis is madd deep.. i didnt loose ma mom or dad to it but i did loose my pop-pop in he was liek ma dad. so i canm relate the pain in a way. sorry for your lost but god has a plan for everybody ya kno.

It got some strong feeling in here..great job. 10/10
-vino

I liked it alot. im Sorry to hear u lost ur dad. I guess I could say I kinda know how u feel but ot excatly nice write Kepp it up!
5/5 always
Kate~