I don't understand how this could not have comments!? a sensational piece of poetry 5/5 i could feel the emotion flowing through every vein of this poem. keep it up!

xD
~NinjaGirl~

It's always so difficult to say good-bye! I'm glad you're expressing some of your emotions through poetry. It does help! Keep it up.

MarvelouS writinG, lonG feelingS, prettY gooD expressionS, happY iN commentinG.. yoU deservE 4 a gooD writinG... 5/5

luzaN

Thanks for the comments guys it means heaps, its hard to say goodbye but time will tell ay

Great work 5/5

Really good poem. =]

amandaxx.