This was a beautifully sad poem, the flow was good and the style worked well.
with love,
Tara-Kay
x

Beautiful Nonnet worth 5/5. I just wanna tell you how about using incompleted instead of uncompleted??? I guess uncompleted is not a word. But its great :)

Tc
Fsams

Wow. i love nonets, they are an amazing type of poetry, and you did it so well 5/5

Who am I? It sounds as though you are me in many ways. Again you have done a wonderful job mastering another form of poetry.

--Sher

Very nice. i loved it. keep it up

Very nice. i loved it. keep it up

Interesting poem.
You captivated the mood so well in this one.
With such limited words, you succeeded to bring the feelings over very good.
I love it.

5/5

xo angelique

Now that was deep, the word choice was elegant, in this style, the emotion was deep and heartfelt, and the flow was almost magical. another well written place, again you have amazing talent.5/5