I enjoyed this poem I like the repition the flow is a little off however the emotion was there.

Beautifully written poem....flowed nicely and i love how you used a question at the end... wonderful job.5/5

Well I like the message in this poem, well done. I think you did a fantastic work in this piece. I really like the last line.

Wow, this poem is superb. Great repetion along with imagery and such nice details.
I like this piece. It's perfect. I give it a 5/5!!