Hi it nice to now that a guy like ur self reads my poems and this poem I wish It great I loved it I read ur others poems and ur rilly into ur feelings I love that in a guy not meany r like these day well thanks for comenting on my poem 100.100 for me
Omg paul! i dont get it...u c so much more when u write! u write on such a whole other level then anyone ive ever seen or read! so creative i sware!!
i really liked this one..
maybe add some more to it..keep it goen :)
Oh I love it! If it's a true poem that is a lucky girl. :) If she saw it she must have thought it was very sweet. It's a five even though there are some parts where the rhyme is off. You are one of the rare cases where I love a love poem and get away with a few off rhymes. Congrats! Trust me I'm picky, so getting a five on a love poem from me is like god saying he's your best friend. :) I'm going to add it to my favorite poems which I have none of here at the moment.
Awww.... I did like this poem! Thanks for commenting on mine! I mean...you'd think this would be cheesy, but it wasn't. Instead it was incredibly romantic and intimate and full of love and emotion! I mean, this was beautiful...wish this was for me! lol !