I really enjoyed this stringed Haiku it was quite good, although I thought Hakiu's had unrhymed lines that is the only thing to me which seemed wrong, although I may also be wrong so forgive me if I am. Overall this piece deserves a 5/5. Well done. ~mel

A very good poem I have always enjoyed haiku's but I have never atempted to write one. I know the subject is usally nature but this is perticually good.

Hmm this one doesnt entertain me as much as the rest. lol but uhmm im not so sure how they are supposed to be written. you explained it to me but i forget :] haha