A good poem again as with your last piece I dont feel the emotion here however it does seam to flow.

I think it was a great poem i voted 5/5 for it. it was a work of art by you very good!

This was really great, your emotion was in this fully and you had so many metaphors. It was really interesting, great job!

Mmm I wasn't big on it. It's not the poem it's just my personal taste. It just didn't draw me in like your other one. I'll give it a four only because I know you did a good job on the type of poem it is.

This poem is good and a tad confusing at times how ever i do give you props on the colorful word usage.

You have great talent for writing poems.
This piece is so deep, and it is written with great topic. Whole metaphor is excellent, truly stunning, and very uniquely described.
Well done, 5/5 from me
My favorite stanza is:

-Sprinkles now turn into dancing droplets,
Lifting the spirits of the ones on the surface.
The water brings life to all it touches.
Refreshing as the light of a new day.-

The imagery in the poem is superb, flawless.

This is a great poem....it was very creative .. i like the sense of imagery in it... and i dont agree with sam mayo^^ ..i dont think it was confusing at all...

the flow was flawless... another 5/5 of course.

Ok..i know i just commented this one..but i was just ready to vote on this and i looked at your rating and it was a 4.4! are these people nuts lol... it definately deserves a higher rating then that... so i voted it a 5.

just thought i would speak my mind.lol =]

I love this one and i know how it feels!!

5/5

laura

I cannot tell if this is about an emotional storm or stormy weather.. that is great when it could lead the reader either direction.

You discriptions were great and held the imagination captive. I like that.

Very nice

--Sher

I like the structure of your poems.. YOu put this piece together well. flawless,,,,,

5/5

The first sentence of this poem was the best and really intriuged me to read on. Loved the use of language again xxx alex xxx

I think my phavourite thing about this poem was that you put it under the category ov 'poems about liphe'. (Man I wish my keyboard wasn't broken. I really need the letter 'eph' phor that word.) Anyway, I read it once, and I thought that maybe you had accidentally stuck it under the wrong category, because I tend to avoid commenting on the poems about nature or anything like that. I personally, as a reader and a writer, lean toward the emotional side ov things, and I don't quite phind it as easy to get lost in a poem about something that I can see everyday outside my window. Though, your poem was so much more than just the storm. It had the pheeling that I like to read, and it was relateable to anybody. Happy or sad, in love or heartbroken, this poem was about the rain coming phor the bad and the good.... Now that that's been said, I really hope that I took phrom this poem everything I should've. The meaning did seem quite simple and easy to read, but I've made mistakes bephore.
I don't have much to say about it, as it was a nice and easy read; but part ov me misses the rhythm you held in your other work. Your use ov words and imagery still amazes me though, and I can only give you kudos once again.
I wish I could give you more constructive criticism, but I like your writing. Keep it up!

I really like this one, there is much depth =]

Mmmm....loved the imagery! 5/5.