Comments : Pain

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Great write... nicely put...
    great work..

  • 14 years ago

    by Jo

    I like this alot and i would be proud if even just one of my poems actaully rhyme..lol

  • 14 years ago

    by Heba

    What amazing. it was a great job, because i thinkin these few words you expressed my loss of my relationships wiht my friends. but, i think you can get over it, just try to make another new friends that they would never be FAKE and they really would care for your feelings. wish u the best.

  • 14 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wonerfulll ,

    jsut i think it would be better, if yuo got some pragraphs in ti for the reader eye,

    1 pragraph make reader afraid i think

    but when i read very very good one

  • 14 years ago

    by brittney perry

    Thats very good, my name it brittney perry iam 18 and writ poems on how i feel, and thats a good way to start out trust me i've been there..

  • 14 years ago

    by BooBear

    I love this poem! Its such a great poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Nawa

    Wow that was so sad, but loved it.
    The usage of word was great and rhyming fit perfectly.
    Beautiful poem.
    Keep up the good work.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    This is also very nice poem. I can't feel pain that is in your poem.
    Good work

  • 9 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    Perfectly written

  • 9 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, this is SPECTAGULAR!!!!! I love it, I adore it, I am blown away by it! I love this poem!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    It's a very Sad and Emotional song. 100/100

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wow
    Your line why have u put my soul in chain.
    Why have u sealed my heart and brain.
    Dear way to express pain
    Simply very well done.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wow
    Your line why have u put my soul in chain.
    Why have u sealed my heart and brain.
    Dear way to express pain
    Simply very well done.

  • 5 years ago

    by ketaki

    Strong on the feeling can feel the pain