Great write... nicely put...
great work..

I like this alot and i would be proud if even just one of my poems actaully rhyme..lol

What amazing. it was a great job, because i thinkin these few words you expressed my loss of my relationships wiht my friends. but, i think you can get over it, just try to make another new friends that they would never be FAKE and they really would care for your feelings. wish u the best.

Wonerfulll ,

jsut i think it would be better, if yuo got some pragraphs in ti for the reader eye,

1 pragraph make reader afraid i think

but when i read very very good one

Thats very good, my name it brittney perry iam 18 and writ poems on how i feel, and thats a good way to start out trust me i've been there..

I love this poem! Its such a great poem.

Wow that was so sad, but loved it.
The usage of word was great and rhyming fit perfectly.
Beautiful poem.
Keep up the good work.

This is also very nice poem. I can't feel pain that is in your poem.
Good work

Perfectly written

Wow, this is SPECTAGULAR!!!!! I love it, I adore it, I am blown away by it! I love this poem!

It's a very Sad and Emotional song. 100/100

Wow
Your line why have u put my soul in chain.
Why have u sealed my heart and brain.
Dear way to express pain
Simply very well done.

Wow
Your line why have u put my soul in chain.
Why have u sealed my heart and brain.
Dear way to express pain
Simply very well done.

Strong on the feeling can feel the pain