This is a really good poem, i like how you repeated empty through out it.
keep writing
peace
soffe
also very good ending.

Wow, i love this poem!

i really like the way 'empty' is repeated, and i particularly liked the last stanza

great job, keep it up :)

Amy x

Really well written 5/5 from me i love this one very much

Very good. Hit home.

I liked this poem alot
especially the last part of it:

Empty

is the heart when
love no longer
lives there "

OMG I love this one. Maybe it explains a little why I feel so empty right now....

Empty

is the heart when
love no longer
lives there

Great poem, keep writing :)

This is so true...great poem...keep it up5/5

Wow, this poem is very wonderful, you just used simple words for expression.