Once again, very good, flowed really asomeness XD haha. one of the best I read all day 5/5

;holds of board that says go you!:

XD

I like dis one alot. its like i can feel the pain your feelin. da way u use ya owrds makes the reader connect..hot poem..nd yea he'll regret it!!lol

Aww that's so sad...great job 5/5
-vino

Wow..there's a lot of emotion in it, and losing the one person you though would never leave your side absolutely kills..i know how you feel..by the time you believe that they're gone..it's too late..great write girly =]

Love is tough isn't it? but i like how you basically tell him that after he walked out you weren't gonna take him back. your a strong individual

I love the length and the depth of this poem.. one of my favorites, I must say. I feel the hurt and the shame of having given somebody everything and then finding out that it was a game.
Beeing left, is like standing naked on the street with no where to go
love it 5/5

Great poem, theres so much emotion within the words i loved it :)

Excellent