You must be a really good friend. I loved this poem you did a great job. You have a nice style when you write. I like it alot.

Well keep up the good work.
Much love and the bests of wishes.

@!Jezzika!@

That is a realy nice poem, you get ur point of across and stil keep the good rhyming

Best poem and that attracts me a lot...

Nazeer

Wow..it was amazing..it was as if iam experiencing the pain....flow is very good
and its overflowed with emotions..
keep it up.. :)

Woah. u and ur friend must be pretti close. ur rhyming helped to express ur emotion which was good. nice. xx

Very emotional and deep that came from the heart. ur friend should feel so lucky 2 have some1 that cares 4 her so much

5/5

Wat can i said i have read alot of poems but they were nothing like this i felt every bit of it i loved the way u did this

nice work keep it up
wardy

Aww this poem was very touching, a sad write, i cant imagine how u much feel when your in that position.
great use of words and ur flow was really good. good job, 5/5.

Your poem is over flowing with power. Wow. This write is intense with love for your friend. I have not much else to say, I am speechless. Your poem is just, powerful.