Okay wow this reminds me of a certain boyy who should not be mentioned because well i hate him =) well i dont but i should..*cough* bobby *cough* haha anyways wonderful poem for sure!!!1 great flow & all. 5/5

Today this is the best I've read of yours. I loved the title I have used it as one of my poems also which isn't posted on this site. The flow was quite good much better in this. I liked the meaning behind it. Well done on creating an interesting poem which didn't bore me what so ever. 5/5 ~mel