NicE poeM.
VerY truE.
EnjoyeD readinG iT.
TakE carE...

LUZAn

It was short but you said you were going to add more or something!
but even though it was short it was well put together and said a lot 5/5

Wonderful, this poem said so much. Well, probably to me that pretty much everyone else; yet...this was amazing. It was like I jumped into a pool, it was a sudden rush of memories. This is great, I can't wait for the rest of the series, you're a really great writer!!
I loved it, 5/5
I'd rate it a 6/5 probably more but, hmph...I can't do that can I?
Well KEEP WRITING
I'm getting anxious.

I like this it will give us a little better look at you which I have been dying for to see how you work and what makes a great writer write...Looking foreward to the rest. Great job

Thats adorable.

And so like real life, not fairytalish. I love how it's not the ideal way to meet, but too you it was very meaningful.
A wonferful write,
Elaine.

Well done, this was a really good piece. it was perfect foir the first part.
love Tara-Kay
x

Good poem with a good start. Im glad that this is just the beginning of the series of poem you have written. Keep it up

5/5

Fsams

Definitely unique on how you describe the first meeting..wasn't expected..so far so good..good flow with this first part..just a tad bit repetitive but not bad.

This made me crack a huge smile : ]] Brilliant start. Makes me want to read the rest of the series, which I shall do : )

Well "chicken" was the first words exchanged. wow nice. but why was this said?

Haha
thats excellent
why was chicken said
my first word to my bf now
was "musical chairs"
haha
its funny how weird words brings people love
loved this
5/5

Aww that's cute.
Excellent job though, it sounds like you met in a cute way :D