Hey Cindy,

Its been so so long. Am so glad of having the opportunity to be with you again. Though you know the sort of schedule i am having these days but no matter how tough life becomes...will always try to be here with you.

Thanks a ton for all your support.
Lovely write indeed

all the best and take care

Will you catch me when I fall
From my cliff of sorrow
Need your love to continue living
Without you time is borrowed
^^^
Oh Cindy this ending is a tear-jerker indeed. You both collab such wonderful work ... and manage to pull the reader into the poem and leave them with a tear in their eye.

Excellent piece my friends !
Luanne

A turely touching piece ,and yet another beautiful one to add to the many that you have already done.

Good job cindy, a very heartbreaking read...amazing work none the less

"Eternity has stood still
Since you left me in pain"

i love those lines..keep up the great work cindy

Good job cindy, a very heartbreaking read...amazing work none the less

"Eternity has stood still
Since you left me in pain"

i love those lines..keep up the great work cindy

Another good write from u cindy. best wishes. ben thompson

Cindy,
Such a beautiful collab. Very heartbreaking and emotional. Wonderful job by you two, and what an amazing job the two of you do when writing. I agree it's hard to tell who wrote which lines. Thats what makes a truly beautiful art of what you two have collaborated together.
Take Care,
Kay

I love the collabs you two do because theyre great, love the flow, i give this a flawless 5/5!! keep them coming cindy!!!

An absolutely stunning piece of poetry. an extremely beautiful but sad piece from you both! 5/5

xD
~NinjaGirl~

Beautiful expressed emotions you penned here feature with EOE. but sadness somebody jealous your work. but i know that is not the issue, anyway... keep them coming my dear friend, I'll visit again soon, take care. Love & Peace.

I really loved it...it made me cry for the first time in a long time. :') 5/5

This is one of the best collaborations I've yet to read. This is such a vivid haunting poem of pure emotion. My kudos to both authors!

Write on!

Grey Ajurahck

A beautiful collab.
Sad emotions.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Cindy....once again you and Nitin have meshed styles and emotions to write a beautifully flowing and hauntingly sad collab. Nice to see you two have written together again.....well done! Debbie

This time only 4 words i want to say:

not becasue i am in hurry or not becasue i want to go. but beacasue these four words willl fill beauty in your poems comments

"i love your writing"

I luv your last stanza it brings the poem to a soft sweet ending of everlasting love xox sam

Emotional collaboration. The 2 styles meld together wonderfully. Nice job!

Excellent job done by you.... Specilly this stanza toally inspire me.....:)

Memories screaming in flame
Holding your picture again
Eternity has stood still
Since you left me in pain

Burning tears was a good one,
I hope it helped.

thank you.