Comments : The Secret I Should NOT Have Shared

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good and the flow is really good too. well done xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Secrets are dangerous things 5/5 very nice maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautifully well written..u done a great job here..

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Wow.. I must read it 3 times already. I likes urs too! It's must be pretty thoughtful. Keep it up!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by LittleMissUnperfect<3

    Totally love it. x3

  • 16 years ago

    by Phil

    Great write really enjoyed it

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Another amazing poem. I have no idea how to explain what I'm feeling with poem, I really liked it, because a couple years ago I was sexually assulted by my uncle and I told my boyfriend about it cause he was hearing stories and now he won't shut up about it...But anyway, You expressed this one really well, And the flow and wording was incredible..Really great job on this piece...

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice poem. I loved the rhetorical questions whic really engaged me. 5/5 for your good work

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Ohhh... this is beautiful.. so sad and full of pain and emotions... the desire to set right what we have accidently somehow wronged...

    This is powerful. Sad to say that it is also true in so many aspects...

    --Sher