by Baby Rainbow
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Thats really good and the flow is really good too. well done xxxxx |
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Secrets are dangerous things 5/5 very nice maybe u can read one of mine. |
by Sarah
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Beautifully well written..u done a great job here.. |
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Wow.. I must read it 3 times already. I likes urs too! It's must be pretty thoughtful. Keep it up!!!! |
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Totally love it. x3 |
by Phil
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Great write really enjoyed it |
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Another amazing poem. I have no idea how to explain what I'm feeling with poem, I really liked it, because a couple years ago I was sexually assulted by my uncle and I told my boyfriend about it cause he was hearing stories and now he won't shut up about it...But anyway, You expressed this one really well, And the flow and wording was incredible..Really great job on this piece... |
by Fsams
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Very nice poem. I loved the rhetorical questions whic really engaged me. 5/5 for your good work |
by Sherry Lynn
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Ohhh... this is beautiful.. so sad and full of pain and emotions... the desire to set right what we have accidently somehow wronged... |