Ooh I have shivers! Loved it!

All I can do is smile...well done Wenchy!!

Love penned yet so heartfelt emotions....simply yet creative written, absolutely beautiful!

Wow, this poem is amazing, every line is so greatly written. I like the fact that you said so much in just two stanzas. The wording in this poem is superb, and the imagery is so vivid.

This poem is incredible. It is very original and it is amazingly written. You created excellent imagery and powerful atmosphere. It really deserves 5/5

Amazing poem with wonderful imagery. It sounds to me like a beautiful, peaceful fairytale. So mystical and beautiful!

Very good, although I think it would have been much better with punctuation. And maybe if it was a little longer. Cause it looked like you didnt really finish it, like you just jotted in a couple mins. Very good vocabulary though, I loved it. 5/5

I really love this poem, so short and sweet 5/5 :D

Mmm, such a nice poem. I thin k you did a great job on it 5/5

I love it great fantasy and mystery

I absolutely loved this poem, oh what I wouldnt give to be able to write like that. fantastic, Timothy r

So much passion. So few lines. Your truly talented.

PrinceCharming,