Comments : Once upon a life

  • 16 years ago

    by AnimeGothFreak

    Good poem, where did you get the inspiration from?

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought it was very great, the rhyming was very good, and the flow was magnifique, and i loved the repition, and i just wanted to keep on reading, another well deserved 5/5

    Stephanie Naylor

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I didnt particularly like this one.. i dont think its your best..i've seen you write better.. it just didnt catch my interest.. but i still give it a 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    The concept was good, the flow was decent except it got a little repetitive... and the word choices were great! 5/5 :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    The flow and beat of the poem is very good. i like it. just not as much as the others, thats not mean disrespectfully. but i actually don't no what to say about it. :[