This was so amazing, I thought this was so beautiful, the way you wrote it!! The flow was flawless and the words you used we so amazing, I loved it!!
I can't wait for the third one!!

Looking forward to reading about the climax of the relationship I agree with Tempted something interesting is going to happen...Great writting liked the way it draws me in makes me quite anxious for the rest. Awesome job

Im so anxious too see what's gonna come next.
I love how you write it like you yourself is reading it out of a book.:)

A precious read,
Elaine.

Yeah, i am looking forward to the next part, this was as good as the first and you have talent
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The first par was good and so was this one! i really loved it!

I really don't lke reading a poem with a series.. but yeah this one is wonderfully penned, rhymings were okay and so as the flow. i also think it really deserve to have a series because i felt like the ending (or the last stanza) just make me feel like i'm not so satisfied

LovE iT! iT iS beautifuL!!! keeP uP yR lovelY thoughtS iN expressionS anD outlooK....

diS iS luzaN

I thought it was great, awesome, it sounds like a great series 5/5

Better flow with this..though i would think the ending of the love would be the ending of the story not the climax..but i guess i will have to wait and see...keep it up.

Aha. I love how you always end it like that = ] Its different, and I like that.

Hmmm. through all this pain and everything u been through what made u depart from each other?