I liked it! Especially the last line, it describes the whole poem perfectly.

A true christian poet and a true christian poem. a perfect way to describe our faith and just such great rhyme and rhythm.

First stanza, it should be "won't". Again, you should capitalize your I's. This piece is truly wonderful. It's very meaningful. Great flow too.

marcella

Hmm... i admire ur work! it seems i am the one saying all that words. 5/5

Wow, so you're one of those people too? It really does help knowing he's out there, doesn't it? Great job hun, 5/5.
<3 Stef

Dear Lish. This is so true. I like how you combine truth, with such nice easy rhyme.
Perfect

Im not sure i understand this poem very well but it was still very good

Wow, this is really good. 5/5

I admire those who have a commitment to there faith. the only problem i could see is maybe try using another word then "cool" because it is slightly cliche. also it's fine to just have lowercase i's when your typing but usually try and make your I's capitals when submitting poetry because it makes it more formal.

Awww, a true heartfilled poem ^^ amazing write. I hope to see more of these after I comment on this one LOL. You have a great talent!!! keep it up xxx Love Roxy