Awesome poem man, i read it and i could almost feel the pain that you describe in the poem

good work :D

Oooo. Awesome job : ]] Love the way you described everything and the emotions were clearly felt.

Fantastic...to put it simply 5/5 your a great writer

Another amazing poem. I love this one also.
Your going to become famous with these writings.

This is a really good poem 5/5

Oh wow this poem is awesome tooo
so much emotion.
i loved this stanze:

"I'm stuck in the past because the future has gone
it gave up on me, now it has moved on"
(Y)

xo.louiii

Such a wonderful poem,short within lots of strong powerful meanings....=]

Dude, this poem almost made me cry.

db4ever

Hi its 'little lost soul' here! I really like this poem it shows so much emotion!
xlittle lost soulx

Ths is beautful 5/5 very very excellent.. dont stop writing!!
-Marina

Great poem alot of meaning behind it i can tell

You said something about my url being sad but know what your poems are sad ):

Wow, so short but so amazing. This describes exactally what I'm going through right now. Great poem!
~Stef

Wow. you captured so much in so few words. This poem really touched me. I hope you write more. I'll be waiting :)