This entire song was amazing, but what stood out for me the most was the first verse:

Oh, such beautiful lips
i never knew someone could speak so much shit
oh, those beautiful eyes
mascara wrapped around with blanket of lies

That is amazing, wow!!

You are an amazing song writer, you could make it big someday if you stuck to it!

Love always, youre BIGGEST fan!!
Lyndsay

Andrew
Awesome piece. Excellent word choices and imagery. Keep it up!
Take Care Cindy