This peom is dedicated to my friend...

Dear you've done a better poem that is perfectly allocated for your intimate friend... nice..

Nazeer

I really don't understand why is this poem rated with 2, it deserves much higher rate.
I like the rhyming in it, it don't seem forced, and the flow of the whole piece is excellent.
My favorite stanza is:
-The irate thunder is uncertain
Waiting to strike and give some pain.
For what I did I knew it was wrong
In limiting our love to sing more song.-
Keep up, 5/5 from me

It is really a nice written poem...it is full of emotions...please..keep it up

5/5

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