Oh this is really good!! It expresses your feelings wonderfully! Awesome job!

Omg this is a really sad one~ Bt i love it! Great job!

Lol woops i already commented on this one! lol sorry

This poem is really well written
it had really dark
and sad subject matter but never
the less it was great,
it was easy to read and had a great flow!!
Well done on a great job
of expressing your self!!
***take care***

Well written poem! very touchy! Wonderful!