This was quite the heartfelt piece, The flow wasn't as strong to me as in the other piece I read but it still came together nicely. You seem to end poetry really well I loved the ending in this one yet again it was powerful and hits the heart. Altogether this poem also deserves a 5/5 keep up the good work. Well done. ~mel

Chosen words were simple and so as the imagination but yeah i agree it is a gloomy and heart felt piece... and it really tear my heart apart maybe because i can also relate on this one. oh by the way, u created the picture perfectly and maybe some people can also relate on this one. Great job! keep up the good work!

Great so sad and deep, i liked it. Nice simple lines that flowed very smooth, great work, keep it up.

Sad... but brilliant :]