Thank you for loving my piece guys... mwah

Its an excellent writing 5/5

Nazeer

Damn nice,,lol kep writing

What a beautiful love poem. Your love shines through your words.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

Beautifully well written..enjoyable piece to read..well done..the poem was so emtional..
*thx 4 the comment*
-sarah

Woohh... kababayan, galing nito ah... kakainlab... nice choice of words...

Truly beautifully written love poem with greatly expressed emotions and wonderful imagery. My favorite stanza is:
-Lessen my loneliness,
Caress with your tenderness.
No one can ever compare,
With the charming love you've shared.-
5/5 from me
Keep writing!

Great poem. I love it. Keep up the good work 5/5

xoxox
Jess

Good!

another great piece, i see more rhyming, you conquered more attention that really great..i see effort..every lines suits for attention..

keep it up!