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by Cotton Candy Clouds
Aww...that was a really well writen poem
it flowed so nice and was truly an enjoyable read you did an great job!
by Angel Of Death
Awwww beautiful poem! u did a great job of wordin it...keep up the good work! and thanx for commentin mine 2
Wow...beautiful poem...full of emotion and the ending just left me in awe...
wonderful job! 5/5
Heartfelt, deep emotion, made this poem really powerful, I think it would be easier to follow if you broke it up into stazas, the reption really made the flow, and the message was clear excellent job
Another amazing piece, i loved every second of it. Good work, thanks for sharing.
I understand this poem so much.
that i could cry.
b/c i go through the same thing.
but thingz [suppositly] will get better.
or at least. thatz what everyone says.
but i believe youll get what you deserve in the end :]]
by ViCkY G
W0w i lub dis poem!!!!!!!!
keep up da good work
Wow, very beautiful poem of love. I love it.
by Marc Ortiz
It was a great poem :) it flowed nicely, well done. You have one mistake though..
The emotions on my wet streaked face from all the tears (Ive) cried
And I have one suggestion :) try to eliminate some of the I's coz it meses up the flow =)
Nonetheless it was a beautiful poem.
That was certainly an amazing write. It flowed well and the message was received clearly. Thought and emotion were defintely there. Awesome work, 5/5
This is a great poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5
by yashar melbourne
Please help me out a little im a new comer loking for help
I love your poem the ending was great.....then again the whole thing was great..5/5
by J L H
Very beautiful poem. enjoyable to read and feel.
The emotion and energy you put in this poem was fantastic. Great job.
I think it is an inspirational poem and you need to keep writing...with much love XxXLynzie KaeXxX
by Laura Ash
I can see why you got such a high rating with so many votes =]