Comments : Rainbow Of Hope.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aww...that was a really well writen poem
    it flowed so nice and was truly an enjoyable read you did an great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Awwww beautiful poem! u did a great job of wordin it...keep up the good work! and thanx for commentin mine 2
    xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow...beautiful poem...full of emotion and the ending just left me in awe...

    wonderful job! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Heartfelt, deep emotion, made this poem really powerful, I think it would be easier to follow if you broke it up into stazas, the reption really made the flow, and the message was clear excellent job

  • 13 years ago

    by Wallace

    Another amazing piece, i loved every second of it. Good work, thanks for sharing.

  • 13 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    I understand this poem so much.
    that i could cry.
    b/c i go through the same thing.
    everyday.
    but thingz [suppositly] will get better.
    or at least. thatz what everyone says.
    but i believe youll get what you deserve in the end :]]
    great poem.
    5/5.

  • 13 years ago

    by ViCkY G

    W0w i lub dis poem!!!!!!!!
    keep up da good work

  • 13 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, very beautiful poem of love. I love it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a great poem :) it flowed nicely, well done. You have one mistake though..

    The emotions on my wet streaked face from all the tears (Ive) cried
    = I've

    And I have one suggestion :) try to eliminate some of the I's coz it meses up the flow =)

    Nonetheless it was a beautiful poem.
    5/5!

  • 13 years ago

    by JaM

    That was certainly an amazing write. It flowed well and the message was received clearly. Thought and emotion were defintely there. Awesome work, 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jess

    This is a great poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5

    xoxox
    Jess

  • 13 years ago

    by yashar melbourne

    Please help me out a little im a new comer loking for help

  • 13 years ago

    by cassanova

    I love your poem the ending was great.....then again the whole thing was great..5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by J L H

    Very beautiful poem. enjoyable to read and feel.

  • 13 years ago

    by Patience

    The emotion and energy you put in this poem was fantastic. Great job.

    Cicely

  • 13 years ago

    by Lynzie

    I think it is an inspirational poem and you need to keep writing...with much love XxXLynzie KaeXxX

  • 13 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Excellent
    I can see why you got such a high rating with so many votes =]