Whoa..this poem is genius...its so amazing.. for some reason it really touched me.

these are my favorite lines...

"Be wary of this forest
The ground is not so green
But smile in that sunshine
Forever feel its sheen
For the moon will fall upon you
and all will lose its joy
upon a twisted lullaby
all you can think of is that boy..."

^^beautiful lines...and the ending was also very good...nice job.5/5

Wow, amazing piece, it is going to my favorite poems list, I like it a lot.
You created stunning and very vivid imagery in this poem, and I honestly admire your words usage. The emotions are excellently expressed, every stanza holds so much greatness.
My favorite one is:
-Like icy petals on the ground
Life's silhouette will stand before
Dancing, twisting, can't ignore you-

Truly wonderful dark poem, keep writing!
5/5 from me

Wow...this is a great write...long but definately worth the read... i love every single line..it flowed perfectly!

outstanding job!5/5

Is this poem about me?

Nope.

WOW i like this one... really a good and brilliant poem... keep up... i give you 5/5 for your masterpiece...