Comments : Love

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    I really like this one. even though its short,it has a good flow and it makes a good point 5/5 =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    Amazing, this was short, but it was so beautifully written. It said a lot in a small amount of words, great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Short and inspirational and very true.
    It was cute and i liked it. well done
    xxx
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent wrote about love and very well defined in your own style. 5/5 obviously :)

    Tc
    fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was short but very catchy :) Love is out there...those who are lucky find that true love.
    Excellent job on this piece.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disgrace

    It was a good poem. it was short but sweet. You got what you were trying to say out. I agree with the poem. You did a good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww how sweeet! I loved the hope in this poem. It made me jump out of my seat and make a chance in love. Well done hun, you truly made me smile *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    Wow. It was really beautiful. It really spoke to me, there was nothing to improve on at least in this poem. I really enjoyed it, Keep going with good work like this. 5/5 Good job

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Thats a cute poem. a nice description of love and i think the flow was almost flawless. nice job. keep it up. 5/5 !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This is simply amazing poem and very enjoyable read and well written poem. Everything was flawless at all. I really love the last line. Another 5/5 for sure!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Beautiful and really positive))
    'Thats what I'm told,thats what I heard' <-- it makes he rhythm dynamic and easy to read this poemanother thing i've noticed about rhythm: almost every line has kinda "to parts" both in rhythm and meaning:
    Love is true ----- and not at all fake,
    So make it a risk ------ you're willing to take.
    I found love -----and you'll find it too,
    Just keep dreaming -----and it will come true.

    i like such way of writing,
    well, though the poem is short, it's meaningful
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Eddie

    Wow short but straight to the point...i looked up to that word a lot when i was younger....i hate it now ha ha but i hope one day i can feel that emotion again