Wow, beautifully written poem, nice imagery, too. 5/5

Really interesting piece. Liked the journey and the metaphors used too. I like reading things that are jumbled as opposed to organised - the thought of the cloud's ears leaking oil etc was just fascinating.

Well done

Mo

You had me agreeing with you.
I'd have to say, this was very good.
The emotion, depth, flow; all wonderful.
Another masterpiece.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

Hi.

i love you.

bye.

Very, very nicely done! What an amazing way with words you have...

"like an empty hospital corridor, lips wrap around themselves
stumbling on words already unsaid. Patterns fall;
and my diction coils, into a thousand missing pieces."
^^^Awesome wording! And the ending is just spectacular, great write! ;o)

I love this.
it's nicer than you are.
ohshutup.
I LOVE YOU YOU SON OF A GUN.

...like a dream report..

...like a dream report..

Effin Ay.
I love it.
And you suck for having talent.
Psch.
Talent hog.
Oi? Should I vote? Does the you wanteth me to?
[[rhymes?]]

I loved this!!!! =)

I love it.
AMAZING job
loved the metaphors
and it made me see a picture
in my head.
:]

It forms a image in your head... Good job!

"And set sail with me, on a dusk grey morning,
Where paper birds move like engines-
This boat has no horizon, the water is still,
and any wind left in caprice; unsettled.
Patterns fall;
and my diction coils, into a thousand missing pieces.
Our boat sinks.
And I don't care, because I'm lonely here anyway."

You're a G.
x

Bring a tear to the eye, excellent.

Okay i'm confused.. this was part of Ironic Allures poem.. did you write it together? Or are you the same person? wtf. haha let me knowww cause i love it!

Dis poem is divine