Wow! that's REALLY REALLY GOOD!!! I LOVE IT! so..... vivid... and discriptive and... wow... i'm speachless. had to read it twice! well done! that's going in my 'favorites' for sure! keep it up!

Woow really good poem !
nice ending
:) Bye x x x
really good, i mean it

Omg i love this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol ofcoarse i like it its my poem lol
go me

xxXXxx alicia xxXXxx