Hah nice poem
:) love this part

now i must move on
and i will forever be gone
but dont worry
all the best deceptions and clever cover story awards
go to you </3

Really nice ending

Aww its so emotional hun and you can tell how much he meant to you.. you're better off without him, us girls deserve people that know how great we are... hope things work out with you xmwahx

That was really good i can sorta relate to some part of that atm im glad u came out stronger tho babe its hard i know *hugz* really good poem tho 5/5 for definate xx

I love this poem i can feel everything you are feeling and i know how you feel about him.

I love it cause some men dont even know what there losing. i know how you feel.

and sneaking can be th most hurtful thing of all.

5/5

Dear Tabi,

All cheaters only cheat themselves in the end.
They miss out on true love, because deep down you always feel when you stumble upon a flirt. Be very happy it came out before you went in too deep. Some young girls find out after they marry or sometimes even after they have a child with a man like that....
You seem like a fine catch to a deserving man to me and much to good to hang out with the loser you described in this poem.
*handing over lots of girl-power* ;)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Dang, that boy got what he deserved! I like how the narrator realized it was his fault he was cheating and not just the other girl's. This was really good. Better luck in the future!